SUMMER
by Derek
Must you leave us so quickly?
Like the reality of a dream you filled
Endless days splashing in the beach
Like sunrise to sunset
Just as permanently and just as quickly
As you came, you leave
And we? We are left with the dream of the reality of Autumn.
8 comments:
nice, I skipped mine, lOL , too afraid!
~Julie
I love how you tie this in! Very clever. ;) C. http://journals.aol.com/gdireneoe/thedailies
Well done, Derek!
I can't think of summer without thinking of the beach... and I liked how you mentioned the dream of Autumn..as I like the beauty of that season too. Good luck with the Poetry challenge. This has been fun participating and enjoying all the talent others have shared.
Beautiful!!
Sorry, I`ve been sick for 2 weeks. I`ll be back more often.
V
Excellent! Good luck in the challenge!
What lovely words and images Derek. Aren't we fickle though; no sooner do we wipe our tears as we wave goodbye to Summer, we are falling head-over-heels in love with Autumn and it's passionate colours and cosy nights! Good luck with your excellent entry.
Tilly x
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lovely poem.
great picture too.
Kathy
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