Tuesday, April 20, 2004

Teardrop

Teardrop by Deveil

Slowly it slips

                       and falls

         from the interior

         of the human soul,

a tunnel,

                   a passageway,

                                       a glimpse

into a tornado of feelings

whirling inside the heart

so beautiful

                    delicate

                                fragile

                                             and clear

uncapturable in its true form

the essence of all complete feelings.

For a moment

                     it dangles

                                   it hovers

                                                over the edge,

then

           ever so slowly,

           slides away into a destiny

           of nothing.   

3 comments:

jojolona said...

THIS IS BEAUTIFUL!  CAN YOU REMIND ME WHAT THE FORM IS CALLED.  I USED TO USE IT LONG AGO BUT STOPPED FOR UNKNOW REASONS.  IT REALLY ADDS TO THE EBB AND FLOW OF ENUNCIATION.

barbpinion said...

Gorgeous entry.
Barb- http://beta.journals.aol.com/barbpinion/HEYLETSTALK/

gbgoglo said...

Just beautiful!  Absolutely beautiful!  You do tears justice. Thank you for sharing!